Digi Pack Development Draft 3

Below is my 3rd draft for my digi pack ancillary drafts, I took into consideration the criticism I was given and made improvements to my work. I changed the colour and style of the text so that you could differentiate the song lyrics to the song titles. I also included love hearts as a back drop on to the background to reflect the romantic genre of the album and to match the logo. I gave my work to the same three students agin to evaluate and help me make final improvements.

Draft 3

Shannon: The red glow effect on the images makes them look unprofessional and childish , it also clashes with the background colour. The images need to be slightly darker and match the old, warn out effect that the rest of your groups looks like. The background itself, no longer matches your final album release poster which therefore doesnt make it look like on promotional package.

Kieran: Although it is effective that you have included elements of genre through toned down love hearts, it looks too messy and makes it hard to read the text. However changing the text to 'Prestige' makes it look more professional bu the subtitles should be in 'poor richard' as that is your known font throughout the promotional package./

Harry: The front cover looks much more professional and attractive to an audience, including the bands logo is important as it helps you to identify the band. Incorporating the red rose is effective as it matches the genre and is used throughout your whole groups work however your front cover looks like everyone elses, it needs to look more individual.