Album Release Poster Development Draft 3

This is another development draft showing that my work is increasingly becoming more attractive and effective, these are the final comments I received before making final adjustments to my final album poster. I have included a rating, changed the image and the background as well as the type face for 'out monday.'

Draft 3

Shannon: Including the ratings is effective however the alternative black and red colours have been stopped which makes it less consistent and more messy.

Kieran: Using The New York Times as the rater is relevent to the band as they are american. Also including a real newspaper makes the poster more realistic.

Harry: The logo for is too far over the Band masthead, a slight adjust to the left would use up more space and make it look less overlapped. Aswell as this there is blank space under 'Hey There Delilah,' you should move it up and make the picture bigger.